tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2666795488092761478.post5272611177783050756..comments2010-03-11T06:44:12.246-08:00Comments on Today is not the end, it is just the Beginning~: FateStephhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18096921828863233449noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2666795488092761478.post-17423674289842162892010-02-07T15:06:52.492-08:002010-02-07T15:06:52.492-08:00Vocabulary
#1 Pompous
#2 Plausible
#3 Unkempt
#4 H...Vocabulary<br />#1 Pompous<br />#2 Plausible<br />#3 Unkempt<br />#4 Hedged<br />#5 Tenacious<br />#6 Rebuffed<br />#7 Loathed <br />#8 Wanton<br />#9 Revere<br />#10 Uniform <br />#11 Amorphous<br />#12 Benediction<br />#13 Hardy <br />#14 Ethereal <br />#15 EccentricallyStephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18096921828863233449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2666795488092761478.post-23852691488360981082010-01-28T18:58:06.468-08:002010-01-28T18:58:06.468-08:00The conflict of the story is that Ronna’s mom want...The conflict of the story is that Ronna’s mom wants her to get married to the Romanian prince and she finds out her dad is king and she hasn’t seen him for almost her whole life. The conflict is both internal and external. The story couldn’t be anymore dramatic. Ronna changes from not wanting to marry to marrying the prince of Romania. This change is very important to the story. If there was no change there would be no story.<br /><br />My favorite part of the story is when Ronna and John kiss under the gazebo. It occurs in the falling action. “He was mine. At that, he dove into my red lips. Perfect. His rough hands embraced my face, as I held tight to his arms. Together with that kiss, we could control anything. It was the power within that kiss, that night that I knew things were going to change forever.” It was my favorite because of the way Steph wrote it. She put in very descriptive words.<br /><br />The tale’s best quality is descriptions of the character’s actions. She put in many details all throughout the story.<br /><br />I don’t think that anything needs to be changed. Maybe look out for a few punctuation errors.Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750928249167645954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2666795488092761478.post-48232226653566389212010-01-27T14:30:20.537-08:002010-01-27T14:30:20.537-08:00THe main Characters are Ronna and JOhn
THe confli...THe main Characters are Ronna and JOhn<br /><br />THe conflic is internal and it is Ronna versus herself as she denies that her future is with John<br /><br />the climax was when john bought Ronna the dress and the prom<br /><br />THe resolution was effective and it showed that Ronna gave in to her betrothement<br /><br />the story did seem believable and I think you did an excellent job making it work<br /><br />The story's greatest strength is its detail and originality<br /><br />the weakness is spelling and grammar which is hard for everyone because as far as i know blogger has no spell check also the way you labeled the flashbacks may be confusing to someAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com